■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important. | |
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According to the many cases in real society, the function of supervisors is so important in those companies or organizations. Therefore, sometimes, the quality of them is often evaluated by many people and analysts. As I am one of critics, I have several ideas about good supervisor.
First of all, to operate a company or an organization properly he or she must show one's dedication to their work and others. Should one has no dedication on others, the people will not do their best on their task. For an example, when I was in the military, there was a captain in my troop. He was always eager and confident to complete the missions he got. Also he showed his great enthusiasm to his members without showing off. It truly increased the vitality of the soldiers and made them work harder.
Second, as you know the meaning of the word "leader", a leader has to have strong leadership. Leadership means the ability to lead people. If one has no leadership as a head of some group, some of the people in the group may think that they got better talent or can handle the company or organization more efficiently than the leader. It could be the main reasons of collapse of those organizations.
As I mentioned reasons and examples above, I think that dedication and strong leadership is very important to be a qualified supervisor or a boss. Thus, I suggest that people should sharpen these skills to be a better leader.
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