■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. | |
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Although there are many kinds of discovery in history, in my opinion, the discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial in for people in my country is the invention of the light bulb. It made our life convenient, effective and opulent. There are several reasons and instances supporting my Idea.
At first, the light bulb contributed on the spurring the growth of our country’s industrial boom. Without the bulb it would have many difficulties in working late or more labor time as much as they need. For example, in the invisible environment it might be impossible to run factories, restaurants or other stores after sunset. There was no light in my town so that people were not able to work under the invisible circumstances.
Secondly, the light bulbs provide people in the world more time on spending in recreation, sharing time with family or others or studying. Thus we can get more intimate with each others under the light of the bulb. To illustrate, I usually meet my friends in the evening or at night due to the fact that all of us work in the daytime. As a result, if there were no light bulb, we cannot get together in the nighttime and have fun together. Meanwhile, we can also study anytime we want and as much as we need.
Thirdly, the light bulb has diminished the social crime rate and dangerous situation. For instance, when she or he is outside alone at night time, there are always possibilities that some bad people such as gangster or bullies could commit their crime in the dark space. However, these days, there are a lot of lights everywhere so that many people are active even it is late. It means that bad people will have very limited chances to do what they want under the bright night.
In conclusion, with the fact that I mentioned above there is no doubt that the light bulb gave us numerous benefits in our lives and the industry and it is definitely one of best discovery in history. I think we really need to appreciate the invention of the light bulb in the past.
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