■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. | |
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According to the historical record, people have idolized the external appearance since thousands years ago. Although there are some people who judge a person by her or his external appearance in these days, I strongly agree with that we must judge people not by their figure but looking inside of them. As time changes, the trend and the popularity of appearance also change. There are several reasonable examples and ideas supporting my opinion.
To begin with, external appearance never shows one's personality or character. Also it is very impolite to judge someone with not based on one's behavior or experience. I think my case would be the best example. Honestly, I think I don't have charming appearance or nice perfect body so that at times, people I meet now told me that first impression they got from me is that he might be a bad person or they think it would be hard to get closer to me. However, now everybody said that their judgment was completely wrong. In fact, I also know that sometimes many people get scared when they meet me at first time because I'm bald and have aggressive face. Due to this reason, I always try to show my heart to them and be familiar with them.
Moreover, the people who judge one by external appearance tend to overlook someone's real talent and ability. In my opinion, people who have not good appearance have better skill on their work or specialized in specific field. As I mentioned before, they usually work hard and take risk to show other people to not to judge by appearance but behavior. For instance, I have watched one clip on the Internet. There was a woman who is fat and has ugly face in the contest program so everyone made fun of her appearance and looked down her. However, as she began to sing, everybody kept silence and they realized their judgment was wrong.
To sum up, It is unreasonable and unfair for someone judged by his or her external appearance. For these reasons, I insist that people should judge one by their behavior and heart. For the last, we should know judgment by the means of appearance and how they get dress and so on could hurt someone's heart.
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