■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Do you agree or disagree with the follwing statement? University athletic departments should receive the same amount of funding as unniversity libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. | |
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Some people think that univeristy should invest most of funding for univeristy library because university is the place for academic studying. On the other hand, the others believe that university must spend money not only university libraries but also athletic departments because it is benefical for university and students. I agree with the latter due to some reasons.
First, the athletic departments are as important as university libraries in that university can offer various experiences to studetns through many departments such as educational programs. In universities, there are a lot of students who have different interests and talents. Any students like to study in the library, whereas others may have their talents related to athletic fields. If the university provides the variety of educational programs in the atheltic department, a high school student who wants to study athlestic fields would choose this university. As a result, it is possible for university to have more studetns who have various and outstanding talents, and consequently, univeristy will be able to earn much money.
Secondly, university should encourage that students maintain their healths because the physical health is important to study harder. When I was a senior student, I got stressed becasue of the problem associated with taking a job after graduation. Playing the vallyball with my friends in the gym, I could feel comfortable and relax and then keep my healthy. Providing the athlestic facilities and activities, it is possible for students to keep their physical heath as well as psycological it.
Finally, athletic department can provide positive influence on the relationship between univeristy and local area where university locates. Because univeristy athletic department offers various programs or activities, people who live near university can use university athletic facilities. Moreover, when the department holds big sports game such as university football game and national league of basketball, nebors can participate games by cheering university team. It must be the good method to have good relationship between university and local people.
In conclusion, when it comes to economic benefit, students' health and good relationship with local people, I strongly believe that univeristies should invest their fundings on atheltic department and library fairly. It allows univeristies to obtain more benefits and profits. | |
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