All university students should be required to take at least one class that teaches the culture of a country other than their own.
The word, 'Globalization' describes the modern world very well. World is getting smaller and countries are affecting each other. It must be very helpful and useful if univeristy students understand other countries culture and societal value in this globalized world. However, I don't think all university students should learn at least one class about culture of other country with following reasons. = 너무 바로 들어간 느낌.
⇒ However, I thinkg it is not nesseccary to enforce all university students to take the related classes with following reasons. 가 더 낫지 않을까?
First of all, all students already learn about the world history and culture in middle and high school in Korea. University is the place where students focues on the study they are interested in and develop the knowledge of the field. If a students want to broaden his or her understanding about other country's culture after the middle and high school learning, he or she will choose the one country's culture as a major or second major. Korean students already have basic knowledge about other countries of culture, so they don't need to take a class about the other country's culture if it is not voluntary.
Secondly, taking the class will not helpful for students who major in traditional studies, such as Korean history, traditional musical instruments or traditional drawing etc. These days, young people in Korea are really interested about the tradition, and they want to study the country they were born as much as they are concerned about other countries' culture. For those students, taking the course about the other countries' cultures is relatively waste of time because those classes will not provide the students interests and inspiration.
All things considered, taking a class about other country's culture might be interesting. However, It should not be compulsory, rather it should be elective for students who have curiosity regarding the foreign countries' culture.
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