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The reading passage states some arguments related to how, when, and where dogs got domesticated. On the other hand, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict these arguments to contradict such argument.
First, the speaker argues that it is unlikely that ancient people adopted wolf pups and trained them as hunting companions. This is because wolves Wolves (this is because는 적절하지 않는 표현 입니다) and humans used different hunting technologies. Wolves chase down prey, while humans use traps to catch prey. Therefore, it would have become more difficult to hunt if people had hunted with wolves. Also, the lecturer mentions that it is unlikely that people trained wolves because wolves become more and more aggressive as they grow. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that dogs came from trained wolves by ancient humans.
Second, according to the lecturer, it is likely that dogs were domesticated by humans much earlier than the writer's suggestion. Archaeologists have found footprints of a boy and a dog in a cave. The footprints indicate that they were walking side by side, and these were estimated to be made 26,000 years ago. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that dogs were domesticated around 16,000 years ago.
The final point made by the lecturer is that domestication of dogs happens in multiple places. To be more specific, the oldest evidence that dogs were domesticated is scattered around the world, such as Europe and middle east. Also, DNA evidence shows that dogs have 4 different ancestors from different regions. This counters the reading passage's argument that domestication of dogs first took place in China.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에 대한 부분을 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 부분을 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |