■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer asserts that the reading’s points are not persuasive. This casts doubt on the reading’s claim that sucralose should be banned due to several health problems.
First, the lecturer claims that sucralose is unlikely to raise the risk of developing diabetes. Numerous different things can cause diabetes. For example, sucralose in diet soda doesn’t cause diabetes. Instead of that, since people who drink diet soda are usually obese, obesity can be a crucial reason for diabetes. This challenges the reading’s point that sucralose is an important factor of diabetes by increasing insulin resistance.
Second, the speaker argues that in a laboratory test, researchers found out that the harmful compounds which consist of other chemicals and sucralose were not found in foods cooked with high temperature. This refutes the reading’s claim that chloropropanols created when sucralose is used for cooking may lead to health problems such as cancer.
Finally, the lecturer contends that there is no evidence that sucralose causes allergic symptoms. Anecdotal records are not reliable. Also, a lot of tests demonstrate that sucralose is safe for human consumption. This opposes the reading’s explanation that sucralose has an effect on allergic reactors. |
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1. introduction의 분량을 3문장 이상으로 늘려주세요.
2. reading and listening의 비율이 너무 listening쪽으로만 치우쳐져 있습니다.
비율은 5:5, 적어도 6:4 정도는 되어야 합니다.
이는 리딩에 대한 디테일 부족으로 이어지며, 분량 부족, 추가 설명 실패 등으로 이어질 수 있으니
리딩에서도 evidence를 많이 찾아서 써주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. body가 상당히 짧은 편입니다. 3-5문장 사이인데, 많이 부족합니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 evidence를 많이 잡아내셔서
분량을 늘리는 데 집중해주세요.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*