▶ Topic :
According to the reading passage, Author claim author claims that Imprelis are not the cause of Evergreen color change. And gives several reason of his argument providing three argument. However, in the lecture, Professor gives several reason as a rebuttal to the reading passage’s point. (대문자는 문장 시작할 때만 서술하시길 바랍니다)
First, The professor contends that study conducted by EPA focus on human and animal. not a evergreen trees. so we do not know about effectiveness of Imprelis to tree does not show the result of trees so we do not have a clear clue on the effectiveness of imprelis to tree. The cast doubt on the reading passage’s point that it was already approved by the US Environmental Protection Agency last year, Moreover, before it was launched for sales, the EPA conducted many experiments that showed that there were no damages to evergreen trees; thus Imprelis is safe to use. to show imprells do not affect negatively on tress.
In addition, The professor insists that hypothesis that not all of the evergreen trees were affected so it is not the cause of color change is implausible. considering the altitude of affected areas, river or water flow might be removed the Imprelis. The counter the reading passage’s assertion that not some of the trees near Imprelis-applied location have gone through damage; however, others have had no visible changes. considering this situation, Imprelis would have not been cause of tree’s color change.
Lastly, The professor argue that hypothesis that tree affected is affected by weather change is far fetched. if it is true, tree suffer from this symtoms suffers from such symptoms throughout the season including summer, fall and winter. this hypothesis do not explain of the decline of the evergreen population. the refute the reading passage’s suggestion that weather changes seem to be the cause of tree’s color change.
점수: 25 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩이나 리스닝이나 구체적으로 자신들의 주장을 전달하였습니다. 하지만 문제는 문법적 부분입니다. 제가 지적한 부분들을 숙지하면서 에세이를 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |