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Some people take it for granted that leadership comes naturally. However, contrary to this notion, it is clear that everyone can be a leader. The rationale behind this is that learning repetitive leadership skill and having a responsibility can enable us to be a good leader.
To begin with, repeating leadership skills can be helpful for us to be a excellent leader. This is mainly because repetitive practices such as speech and actions can motivates motivate us to improve ourselves and perform better in a group. Moreover, many famous leaders was were not good at controlling their group at first. Therefore, anyone can be a great leader if they develop skills as to leadership. For example, when I was in high school,I wanted to be a class president. However, I was not qualified as a class president such as controlling my classmates, having a sense of humor, and having a relationship with my class teacher. Therefore, I started and repeated these actions to have a leadership skill. After three-months, I had changed little by little and I recognized by my classmates. Consequently, I was elected as a class president by voting and develop my social network. If I had not practiced these skills, I have not been selected by them.
Moreover, anyone who have a sense of responsibility and confidence can be a great leader. This is due to the fact that having a sense of responsibility makes us to do anything we want. In fact, many people were a leader because they were selected by others. Nevertheless, they can execute a lot of missions and even make great accomplishments. For instance, when I was enrolled in college, I joined a tennis club. At that time, I was selected as a leader by other club members, and even did many crucial tasks. However, in spite of short experience, our group was financially supported by college because I administrate my club well like having first prize of a tennis contest on campus. Therefore, anyone who have a sense of responsibility can do many difficult mission and naturally acquire many skills as to leadership.
In short, both opponents and proponents have debated over this disputable issue and both sides seem to have good reasons to support their arguments. Nevertheless, from my perspective, I would be confident that anyone who want to be a leader can be a good leader, concerning that people and our society will benefit from it.
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