▶ Your Answer : There is currently a debate about whether
rapid development has positively affected our society or not. Perhaps enormous
rapid development has its advantages, but I believe that these development
gives to our society some bad effects for two reasons.
To start with, swift changes in our society
would damage to our environment. Many consider that changing various things in
our society is able to give to people convenience. However, these changes have
allowed that our environment is damaged. For example, in last year, my
community announced to build new transport station. If the new transport
station build, our community’s people would be convenient when they use some
public transports. However, by constructing the new station, our community
would be loss national park where people can breathe fresh air. In this case,
we can find out that development give to people a lot of convenience, but it
would be likely to damage our environment.
On top of that, when there is rapid
development, we are not likely to relieve stress. It is evident that we have to
follow many changes generating in our society. These society that there are
many new technology, new machines, a lot of creation gives to people degrading
their life quality. According to a recent poll, the majority agreed that it is
hard to try to follow rapid development because many new things allow people
being confused. In addition, last Friday, a renowned professor or Yonsei
University published an editorial in his research and as a result, his study
supported my view. He said that the present people in society that there are
many rapid developments has suffered these changes. As a consequence, these
result find out that living a society with rapid development allows to people
degrading their life quality and give many stress.
To conclude, I believe that there is no
doubt that rapid development allows to our society to damage environment and to
people to give a lot of stress, and also to degrade their quality of lives.
Opinions may vary from people to people, but what does not change is that this
topic is something that needs to be addressed. |