Some people believe that swift decisions are never the right ones since people can gain correctly gather and organize a large amount of information only when spending they spend enough time in making a decision, while other people think differently.
If I were asked to choose, I would say that hasty decisions are not necessarily bad selection.
There are several reasons and example as follows.
To begin with, people have to make a lot of decisions for a short period of time.
But, in general this time, people often slowly think and gather their essential information to make sure everything is right for certain information and good efficiency.
Ironically, they will lose a lot of other decision because time is always not profuse to conveniently agonize a decision.
Also, if they put off their important decision for the next day by saying that we have to spend a time for good choice, their life attitude can be lazy. (What does it mean?)
So, I think people have to quickly make decisions for other left decisions.
For example, when I was an 8, I hardly resolve my homework of half-term.
This is because I wanted to help my mother's household chore or study my the main subject for an overall grade. (Such as?)
So, I swiftly finished my homework Such as essay or diary.
What I mean by this is that we have to make a decision quickly for other left and piled decisions.
On top of that, spending a lot of time in deciding something important decision can be too much specified information and unlogical saying. (Hard to understand)
This is because if they certainly consider the trivial condition or knowledge for their good decision.
It will conversely call a very intricate and absurd logic.(Wrong sentence)
So, I want to quickly hurry up to make a decision because I can create a simple and lucid decision And simple answer can be better choices than intricate decisions.
For instance, according to an experiment of Tokyo University, swift decisions can be equivalent merit with meticulous decision.
They divided two teams, requiring them to write an with spending the time for their essay, team 1 had to write and summarized their decision for 30 minute and team 2 had to organized their think for 3 hours.
As a result, team 2's essays got were evaluated a rank A mark from logical or certain aspect.
But, their essays were appraised a rack C from convenience of aspect. (What does it mean?)
To sum up, the decisions made to make for a short time can save conserve the time for other decisions and it can be very lucid and undeniable answer.
In this regard, I think that swift decisions can be right one.
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