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The university and the college became the final course of study to most of the people. Recently, a majority of the high school graduates go to the university or the college. But it costs requires for student to spend at least two mores years for graduation and to pay for tuition fee a lot. even the semester fee is not free of burden. Then what makes students to keep going to the school?
Firstly, they go to university or college to learn more. Until the high school, students are educated with many different kinds of over all subjects, the curriculum which is more proper to find where her/his interest is in. Thus, if one finds out what s/he wants to learn more, s/he have to got to the university to continue the learning. There, they can study and learn more vast things with students and professors with similar interests.
Secondly, they choose to continue their learning to get a certification. In this modern society, especially in Korea, the university graduation certification is important for getting a job has a powerful effect. Not only for the jobs inquire doctor degrees but also to be a sales worker or get in to a company, education degrees became a essential condition. (What does it mean?) Because their rivals will have a scholar degree, they also must have them to compete them.
Thirdly, the experience also can be the one of the most important reasons to go to the university. Being a university student is a unique experience and this as they can be a student but an adult at the same time. This is the perfect time to enjoy the club activities, traveling, relationships and lots of things they can not do before or later when younger and older. Thus to who still has no idea of future job, experiencing and seeing lots of things can be helpful to build their future plan. The place can be an outlet and the platform according to the situation of the student.
Because of those reasons above, the university or college is now becoming the place worthy of high costs. That is, it already became a necessary course in our education curriculum unless one has brilliant and exact future plan on her/his own.
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