▶ Your Answer :
Nowadays, shopping centers are in the
center of people`s daily life. However, there is no large shopping center
around my house. Therefore, I support the announcement that insisting to build a
large shopping center in my neighborhood should be needed. I feel this way for two main reasons,
which I will explore in the following essay.
First,
it is able to live more convenient life if a large shopping center is located
near where I live. To be specific, we can go shopping and buy necessary
materials whenever I we want. Before the construction of a department store, it
was hard to go shopping because nearest shopping center was about 30 minutes
away with a car. Only internet shopping was possible due to this problem. In
addition, I do not prefer online shopping because it only allows indirect
experience regarding the product. However, if a department store is located
around my place, I would feel very happy because it will enable me to estimate
products with direct observation. It would probably help me to make a better
choice when selecting a merchandise.
Second,
I would save more money due to the presence of shopping center. Generally,
every shopping center sells many items on a cheaper price compared to in comparison to the normal
convenient store or a shop. As a result, I may get several chances to get
high-quality product in cheaper price. For example, when I was shopping on the
internet, I saw a jacket which was so charming. I really wanted to buy it, but
financial problem blocked me from the opportunity. However, I saw the exactly
same jacket in the department store next to my mother`s house and it was on
sale which was almost half of price compared to the one on the internet. I
bought it immediately without hesitation. Nonetheless getting a fine product in
a bargain, I could save money because of ceremony the huge discount in the shopping center. As
can be seen in this situation, a lot of events in the shopping center give us a
big chance to save money and get better merchandise.
As
I started above, locating shopping center near my neighborhood has clear
advantages. This is due to the fact that it makes my life more convenient and
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