Some believe that In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure. There are obviously many opinions regarding with this topic. However, I personally agree with the idea that it was difficult to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure for the following two reasons. People could not get a lot of information about job or career and there were lots of competition in the past.
To begin with, people could not gain a lot of information about their job and career. They could not exchange information about job and career with each other because social service networking such as the internet did not develop in the past, So it was not easier for people to gain exact information about what kind of job is good or bad. To be more specific, my father experience can be an example. When my father was in university, he thought that what kind of job is good or bad pondered what kind of job is good for him in order to live a successful life. His friend recommended designer because many companies like people who have imagination, and at the time, his professor talked to him that designer was bad job in future because there were already a lot of designer. He did not believed their recommendation and it made him to confuse more. As a result, He chose other job. (말이 뒤죽박죽 인거 같습니다 좀 더 어떤 이유로 그 직업을 선택을 하지 않게 됬는지 설명이 필요할 거 같아요) He talked to me that if he used the internet in the past, he will would get good outcomes.
Some oppose to the opinion, but first it ensures that In the past it was difficult to identify what type of career would lead to successful future because there were lots of competition in all of the field. Interestingly, this controversy has been a debate to discuss modern society to discuss what is beneficial to future. Initially, I thought that it was easier to identify what type of career or job would become successful. However, as a result from the intense discussions, I deeply considered that it was difficult for people in the past to look for what kind of job is beneficial in building a bright future. During the past global economic crisis, People did not know what kind of job is beneficial in future because there were lots of competition and unemployment rate was 80 percent. People confused direction of their life. (전반적으로 예시가 이유를 서포트 하지 않는 다는 느낌이 듭니다 왜 과거에 경쟁이 많았는지에 대한 구체적인 설명이 들어가야할 거 같아요)
To concluded, I strongly believe that my standpoint of the two reasons proves it was difficult for people to success in the past for the following reasons that was shown. People could get a lot of exact information about job and there were lots of competition in the past. In this regard, it was difficult for people in the past to look for what kind of job is beneficial in future.
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