■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Topic : Wave Farms (해커스 Actual Test Writing Test 1번) RC : Wave farms will be increasingly common in the future due to many advantages. (1) They are incredibly reliable generators. (2) wave-energy facilities have been proven to be environmentally friendly. (3) They do not have a negative impact on the natural beauty of the surrounding landscape.
LC :Some experts argue that the reading passage's claim is just an illusion. (1) It is not reliable because of wave farms' technological problem. (2) It is easy to dismiss : they contains harmful chemicals to move freely. (3) It is noticeable because of bright colors. |
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▶ Your Answer :
In the lecture, the speaker contends that
it is just an illusion that wave farms will be notably common in the future.
This counters the reading passage’s claim that there are many advantages of
wave-energy facilities that explains why these will be popular.
To begin with, the lecturer argues that
wave farms sometimes fail to provide stable amount of energy. This is because
there is a technical problem that the converter in a wave facility often
malfunctions. This casts doubt on the reading passage’s claim that wave farms
are reliable generators because waves are constant and presumable.
On top of that, the lecturer says that
wave-energy generators use some devices which contain harmful chemicals. The
machines should use these chemicals to move devices freely. This opposes the
reading passage’s claim that wave farms have been proven to not have any
detrimental effects on the environment.
Finally, the lecturer insists that the
scenery near wave farms has been negatively affected by wave farms. Wave farms
should be painted with bright colors, so that they are noticeable. This refutes the
reading passage’s claim that wave farms do not have any negative impact on the
surrounding landscape. |
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점수: 28/30
잘 쓰셨는데 전체적으로 바디 분량이 적은 것 같아요.
인트로보다 1.5~2배 이상 적어주시면 더 좋을 것 같습니다.
그런데 this opposes, this refutes~ 이런 식으로 대비를 확실하게 해주신 점은 정말 좋았습니다!
수고하셨습니다. *^^*