▶ Your Answer : Undoubtedly studying plays a vital role in people’s daily lives in many of the places where they work or play Some people might argue that it is better to study alone than in a group while others do not think differently. If I were asked to choose one, I would say that studying in a group is preferable to studying alone There are several reasons why I think this way as follows. for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, studying in a group allows students to be responsible. Students studying in a group have to manage time and abide by rules of their study group. When these obligations are fulfilled, students tend to realize the importance of being responsible. For example, my youngest brother used to be lazy and selfish. He changed little by little after he got into a study group. He realized his punctuality allowed him to mingle with others while his laziness negatively affect others. If he had studied alone, he would still have been irresponsible. Next, according to the result of experiment by the Seoul National Institute of Education, group study proved to be more efficient way of studying. In the experiment, the group of people who studied together exceled the group of people who studied alone in getting SAT score. In particular, students participating in a group study could easily help and ask questions one another whenever they came across the difficult problems, which were activities that students studying alone couldn’t do. All things considered, the advantages of studying in a group far outweigh those of studying alone for the reasons I have mentioned above. The first one is that it improves one’s responsibility and the second one is that it actually makes students excel in achieving their goal. All in all, the importance of studying in a group cannot be overestimated. Good: 24~30 점수: 27 독립형 에세이에 있어서 가장 적합하게 잘 서술된 독립형 에세이인거 같습니다. 독립형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 본인의 에세이가 설득력이 있냐 입니다. 이러한 부분에 있어서 지금 이 에세이는 잘 서술된 거 같습니다. 각 바디의 예시나 설명들이 이유를 잘 꾸며주고 있습니다. 수고많으셧습니다.
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