▶ Your Answer :
Both
reading passage and lecture are dealing deal with a presence of an advanced
civilization in the Amazon jungle. While the author of reading passage suggests
three evidences to refute its existence, the lecturer brings several ideas to
contradict the author's points.
First
of all, the author asserts that the dense vegetation of the Amazon jungle
prevented people from forming the vast civilization. On the other hand, the
lecturer disputes this point by suggesting some satellite images which were
taken recently. The images show structures such as roads and canals, which
could have helped people to work together to form a large civilization.
Secondly,
the lecturer counters the authors opinion that there was no advanced society because
the artifacts discovered in the Amazon are too simple. In contrast to the
suggestion, several sophisticated and elaborate items including beautiful
potteries were discovered near the Amazon river. These artifacts can be the
evidence of the presence of an advanced society.
Finally,
the author points that there was no large civilization because European
expeditions could not find nothing more than scattered tribes. However,
according to the lecture, the Amazon forest is too vast, so it is not strange
that they failed to find the evidence of the civilization. In fact, the large
civilization in Cambodia could not be found until the mid-nineteenth century
due to the thick jungle of the region. Good: 24~30 점수: 24 아쉬움이 있는 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요하게 보는 것은 리딩과 리스닝이 얼마나 적절하게 비교하였는 가 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족 합니다. 각 단락에서 한 문장으로만 리딩을 설명하고 있습니다. 서로 다른 리딩과 리스닝을 비교하는 것 이기 때문에 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박 할 수 있는 정보들을 더 서술해주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |