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While the author of the reading passage argues that human cannot live on Venus for many reasons, the lecturer opposes the reading's assertion with counter views.
To begin with, the speaker argues that the claim about atmospheric pressure is wrong. We need to take a look at pressure at Venus' surface more closely. In fact, the pressure is lower than what we think. Even, the surrounding on the planet is equal to Earth's pressure. Consequently, we do not need to concern about this issue we think that it is very dangerous to live on the planet. This casts doubt on the author's claim that air pressure at Venus' surface is high and all spacecraft cannot endure the pressure.
Second, the lecturer points out that the argument regarding water is mistaken. It is hasty to conclude just by looking at supply of water. For example, compounds that made up of many chemicals such as Carbon dioxide, Sulfuric acid, and Oxyzen, in fact, are necessary for human. This was because the compounds on Venus can make water through chemical process. Moreover, they can obtain diverse substances through this process vital for living. This goes against the writer's view that there is no reservoirs of water and people rarely live in short of Oxygen or water vapor.
Finally, the professor contends that the opinion concerning sunlight is flawed. This is due to the fact that, in fact, the atmosphere above thick clouds is not thick. Although sunlight is reflected by the layer, stations that is going to install on Venus's atmosphere can reflect too. Therefore, people who live on the planet can produce electricity by repetitive reflection. This contradicts the idea presented in the reading passage that since there are many thick clouds, sunlight do not penetrate the layer. And they cannot make solar energy. Good : 24~30 점수: 24 아쉬움이 많은 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에 궁국적인 목적은 리딩과 리스닝을 얼마나 적절하게 비교하였나 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 너무 리스닝에 정보만 과부화로 많이 서술하였습니다. 리스닝에 대한 정보를 많이 서술하는 것도 좋습니다만 리딩에 대한 설명이 많이 부족합니다. 한 문장으로 리딩의 정보를 서술하는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 설명들을 더 서술하는 것이 좋을 거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |