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The reading argues that Genetically Modified (GM) crops are
beneficial because it will reduce world hunger and food price, and increase availability
to vaccines. However, the listening refutes with this idea for three reasons.
To begin with, the reading states that GM crops will
contribute to reduce world hunger, with the example of rice. However, the
lecturer thinks this is not realistic because there are already enough foods.
The problem depends how to equally distribute the foods, not the amount of
foods we have.
Secondly, the reading argues that GM crops can decrease the
food price, as they are more resistant and will stabilize food supply. The
lecturer refutes with this idea because companies which develop GM crops seek
for profits, hence the price of the GM crops is 5 times greater than the non-GM
crops. Also, developing GM crops need more water, which directly relates with more money.
Thirdly, the reading maintains that GM crops produce
vaccines, which are easier to control and disseminate, especially in developing
countries. This contradicts with the listening as these GM vaccines are made of
fruit plants, such as bananas and tomatoes, which are also perishable. These
fruit-based GM vaccines would require same conditions to keep cool, just like
conventional vaccines. (207 words) Good: 24~30 점수: 26 굉장히 간결하게 서술된 통합형 에세이인거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 크게 보는 것은 각 리딩과 리스닝의 정보들이 얼마나 적절하게 비교 되었는지를 봅니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에는 아주 간결하게 리딩과 리ㅅ닝의 정보들이 빠진 부분이 없이 잘 서술되었습니다. 하지만 약간 아쉬움이 있는 부분들이 각 이유에 대헛 좀 더 구체적인 설명이 좀 더 넣어지면 더 나을 거 같다라는 느낌이 듭니다. 잘 서술하였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |