▶ Your Answer :
Some people think that life has become
harder compared to the past time when our grandparents were young. However in my
opinion, modern life is much more comfortable and easier than past days. This
is attributed to because of the development of transportation and advent new communication systems.
To begin with, traveling becomes far more
convenient now that it used to be. Over the last 60 years, there were not many
options for traveling. Transportation systems were not fully supplied and it
was not common to use high-speed train or airplane. On the contrary, people nowadays in
present time have more options for traveling such as KTX, SRT or inland airplanes.
For examples, in the past time, my grandparent has had to take a train to go Seoul to
Busan. (From where?) It took almost 8 hours. Even going to another country could not be
imagined at that time. It was too expensive since and there were not many airlines.
However, nowadays, we can go Seoul to Busan within two hours through the express train and flight.
Even going abroad is not the big deal.
On top of that, we can communicate easily
thanks to the cell phone. In the past, when our grandparents were young, technologies are not highly developed people
didn’t own cell phone. Thus, it was not easy to contact each other and people had to wait for a long time to receive a get
mail delivered. However, today almost all of most people have their personal mobile phones. This
invention made us very convenient. Moreover, this cellphone made people in the
world communicate thorough internet-based social network service. For example,
when I planned to travel Paris last summer, I could find a nice place to sightsee
or have meal through Instagram. And after arriving there, I could share my days
in Paris with friends in the all over the world.
To sum up, living in present time modern society gave can give
us more convenient life. Transportation made us reduced the time to move another
place. Cell phone also gave us a chance to communicate people easily. In this regard,
life now is less challenging than when our grandparents were young. (326)
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