Topic : Although many people care about the environment, the current environment situation will not improve in the future.
It is great worth to discuss whether or not the environmental situation get better though there are a huge amount of people cares about this situation. While some people might agree with this statement while others might disagree Some people might agree but others could disagree.. As far as I concerned, I agree with the given statement. First of all, I think people are enormously selfish. This is because many people want to live their own life not thinking about the next generation. Embarrassingly, It is the same for me. I was a good girl who recycled and cared about animals and green and the pollution of water. So I usually did the recycling and do not harm any animals and greens, even never step on them. Additionally, I did not use shampoo or treatment for my hair. But as I grow, I realized people are not acting like me do not act similar. Thus My hair is unhealthy and recycling is one of the most tired things in the world. I eventually thought that the world will not change on my own. As a result, I did all the things I have never done before. This led me to a bad person and I think this will apply to many people in the world. In this regard, the world is not changing by a few people.
Secondly, the research conducted by Mississippi university, more than 40 percent of the number of crashes that did not recycle are increased march, 2018 compared to march, 2013 in America. This figure means that there are more people who do not care about environmental pollution than those who care. In this situation, without proper law or people’s care, it would lead to destroying the destruction of the earth. Besides, it is already an ongoing problem.
For all these reasons, I strongly believe the current environmental situation will not improve in the future although there are many people care about the environment.
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Fair: 17~23
점수: 20
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