Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
It is controversial to compare enjoying free-time activities and not enjoying it. Even though each one has advantage and disadvantage, I would like to make plan for my free-time. There are reasons why I choose that and why I prefer that rather than the other one.
First, I can savor what I want to enjoy if I make plans for my free- time. For example, I can go to trip with my family, go to see a movie that I eager every time, and learn new sports such as sailing boat and inline skating. We can do everything that we cannot enjoy in time when we are in working place.
Next, usefully using free- time make be better condition our bodies and mind. Imagine that should you stay home without any plan during the free- time, how do your mind and body feel? It is exactly to harm for your health. Being social animal, human should be active.
Last, the most important thing is that we can make positive life as savoring and enjoying free-time with useful plans. According to most psychologist’s studies, almost of all suicides come from sadistic and negative thinking. It is considerably relative whether spending leisure time or not for their free-time.
Because of these reasons, I assert that we have to make plan for our free-time. I think that only setting up plans for free-time, we can be given ecstatic gift. Although it is not good that we always consider time playing, occasionally, we have to rest for our tired brain. It will not only open new life but also make new ourselves in modern society.
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