결론만 다른 데에서 따와본건데요..
문법상 오류나...개선점 보이면 좀 부탁드립니다. 미리 감사드립니다...
As I have mentioned in the above paragraphs, group activities already become an undetached part of people's life. Without them, people may feel boring, hopeless and unsafe. So how can people shun the others?
===> Without them <---- 여기서 them이 group activities를 받은건데 them으로
써도 괜찮은 거 맞죠?