31일이 시험인데 저 진짜 공부 하나도 안해서요...
TWE 어쩌피 점수 가망 없으니까 그냥 몇점나올것같은지 보고 쓰기는 포기하게요...
저는 2.0나와도 춤 출것 같네요(..)
저는 Paraphrase도 잘 못하는 비운의 여자아이입니다(...)
제가 쓴 글에 물론 문제가 많겠지만(orz) 그래도 하나하나 지적해주시면 뽀뽀해드리겠습니다(..)
There are many TV shows which can attract people easily and make people addicted nowadays. Sitting on a sofa, We can watch whatever we want to see like a soccer game between Korea and Togo, Maroon 5's music video, and hidden stories about middle east. Some people say that TV is one of the influencial factors of interrupting dialog between people. I don't think, however, dialog is hindered by TV. I rather think TV stimulates communication.
First, TV makes the topic. We can discuss what we watched the other day. When you meet a wo/man for the first time, you can break the ice with documentary about euthanasia on channel 5, and If s/he says that s/he also saw that and s/he really reminded of her late grandfather having suffered from the cancer, then you can keep talking about it, and that's the conversation.
Last, We can share our interests. We can talk about the how the actor acted on the drama and how much I adore a singer's song. Let me give you an example by what I always do. I always talk about the songs that I hear from somewhere on MTV, and we talk about and my friend says she likes it. Therefore, relationship between my friends is getting more great by conversing among us.
As I mentioned above, TV provides something we can talk and we eventually can know each other by sharing interests. That's why I think TV spurs a talk.
처음에 introduction쓸때요, body부분에 할 말 안쓰면 점수 깎거나 그러나요? 한번씩 던저주는게 낫지요?
그리고 First, Second 이런거 진짜 식상하지 않나요-_- 좀 괜찮은거 있으면 추천 한번씩(..)
제발 한번씩 봐주시고 몇마디 해주세요ㅜㅜ