Some people think that one of the responsibilities of advanced countries is to give financial aid to poorer countries. Do you think advanced countries should be required to dole out aid to poorer nations? Why or why not? |
A debate about whether developed countries should help developing countries to alleviate property is continuing. For in some stances of advanced countries such as the U.S, they believe it is their(-> country 들을 말하는 거죠? Responsibility of each country) own responsibility to get out of hunger in the competitive world. However, in my respect, developed countries should help undeveloped world. Firstly, many people are dying due to extreme hunger->이부분을 주제와 연관되서 조금 고친다면 the remainder of the food in developed countries are enough to satisfy the amount of need for food in developing countries. 이것도 명쾌하진 않네요;; While the developed countries are throwing away their food to trash can and started to find new life styles such as well-being thanks to enough food, Africans and other country's people are loosing their life because they even do not have piece of bread. It is true that advanced country do-> does not have obligation to give a hand to poorer countries since they could be competitors in near future in globalize world. However, when it comes to human life, I believe all races have duty to assist poor people. The UNISEF declared that most of children in Africa do not have enough food to sustain their life and get ill due to shortage of medicine. However, if developed world people give a dollar to them, most of children could have meals for more than one week! Therefore, since it is not a big deal, I believe advanced countries should aid poorer countries. Support가 정확한 주제를 가지고 잇지 않네요;; 그냥 도와야한다. 이유가 developed는 남아돌지만 developing은 부족하다. 조금씩 도와주면 이겨낼수 있다. 이게 다인 것 같은데… // Secondly, many advanced countries caused other countries to be poor. In the era of industrial revolution, many Europe->European countries, which most->most of which are developed countries, intervened to African countries, which are in poverty in these days. They started to extract resources of African cultures and started to spread their own cultures such as Christian religion. So, after few years after independence, they lost their identity and infra-structure since they even did not have time to make their economy structures. For example, in Uganda, they are fighting because of difference of religion after being colony of one of Europe country. In this situation, they are becoming poorer due to extreme fight and they even do not have any structures of economy because of over-extracted resources and shortage of technology since they had no sovereignty to develop their own skills. Therefore, I assert that advanced countries should aid poorer countries. 두번째 support는 신선한데요~~^^ 다만 자기가 저지른 일에대해 compensate 해야하는 개념으로 aid해야한다. 이런 문장이 좀 추가됬으면 하는 바램이^^ 내용은 담겨져있는 것 같아요; In conclusion, developed countries should assist developing countries because of those opinions. I think if some people are dying because of hunger, other people who have enough food should help them. I wish rich people should not be selfish any more, they should learn about how to share their property. |