People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different |
It is->There is argument regarding whether people are not satisfied with what they have, since they want sometheing new and more. argument가 만족하지 못하다. 새로운것을 원하기 때문에 라면 There is argument that people are not satisfied with what they have, ~ Some people claim that it is not always true. Upon closer to examination, a number of people are prone to be satisfied with what they have, such as asset, job and familiies. This is because (it is) human genarally have personality to compare themselves with others. In addition, they usually strive for higher goals: it can develop themselves in many fields.
Firstly, People have inherent charactrics to comapre them with other people about job and other something :they tend to be satisfied with themselves.some people point out that It is different case by case. On the contrary, the more they compare with other people, the more they want to have something.->the more they can have what they want. To take an examination,Although they have enough a nice car as well as house, they want to buy better those, when they see better those of others.In this respect, People are inclined to compare with others' possession: they always want to have something different.
: 을 자주쓰시네요, 접속부사 Thus, Therefore 같은걸로 바꿔보세요~
Secondly,People always make an effort not only to achieve goals but also to have something which they don't have. It leads to improve themselves. To be specific, they want to get a better job and earn more money. It has a positive effect on them: it allows them to strive for something ranging from special to better. Because they already know that this personality enhances them to develop themselves.접속사만 있네요, That's because or 앞에 절과 이어서 쓰세요~For example, It can enable them to get promoted. So for this reason, people tend to strive for higher living as well as businesssurroundings: It means that people are uaually satisfied with themselves.
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