marks (grades) encourage students to learn. |
People have varying->various ideas regarding whether grades improve students' academic abilities. Some people think that students are under stress, due to marks; it is harmful to the students. However, I think, Upon closer to the examination, grades have a positive effect on students. It can offer students a sense of the achievement as well as a sense of the competition. Thus, grades can enhance students to learn.
Firstly, students can set a goal and feel a sense of the accomplishment with the help of the grades. Although different people have different ways to learn, through grades, a number of the students make an academic plan and strive for achievement. For example, when i->I prepare for exam, i->I usually schedule my study('s) plan and make an efforts->efforts to achieve better grades. It's effecitive->effective way to learn and study. In this respect, in order to obtain better grades, a->an increasing number of the students learn and study, much harder.
Secondly, so as to achieve the higher marks, a growing number of the students are more competive->competitive to learn and study. In other words, grades can improve students' competition which is good for learning. The more students feel a sense of the competiton->competitive, the more students are motivated to study hard. Comparing with others' grades, students usually not only concentrate on the lecture but also do their home works hard. According to the reaserch, in order to make higher grades, students who have a competition with classmates can have excellent learning. As a result, due to the grades, many students are competitive to learn; it is more efficient to learn.
머릿속에 competitive, competition 만 남네요. 글이 약간 냉소적일 수 있어요. 경쟁이 학생들에게 공부하게 만든다. 좀 말이 안 맞는 것이 첫번재 줄에 많은 학생들을 배우는데 있어서 경쟁력있게 한다. 이렇게 나오는데요...음.. 글이 약간 논리적이지 않은 것 같아요..;; In competitive worlds, makrs can be one of the most objective standards to be evaluated. 이렇게 support문장을 내세우고, 많은 학생들이 경쟁사회에서 살아 남기 위해서 더 많은 노력을 하게 된다. 예를 들면 취직할때 성적을 본다. 그래서 학생들은 다른 학생 보다 더 높은 점수를 받기 위해 공부를 더하게 된다. 이것은 결국 학생의 지식이 넓어지는데 도움을 준다. 이런식으로 쓰시면 좋을 것 같아요.
To conclude, for higher grades, many students tend to learn and study. Through the marks, numerous students set s goal and achieve the goal. In addition, grades allow students to feel a sense of the competition.
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