What is better way to get information, watching TV or reading book. |
Book is the one of the original ways to obtain information. Many people gain knowledge by reading books at library. Another way to get information is watching TV. Many people watch TV during their free time. They gain information by watching news, documentary, and other kinds of programs. In my opinion, watching TV is a better way to get information because it is more fun, memorable, and new. First of all, it is more interesting. TV uses two kinds of sense; watching and listening. These senses are easier to understand and concentrate than the sense of book, looking ->looking은 형용사로 쓰이죠.. 그냥,, both sesnes help people to understand and concentrate more. . Visual effect is useful to understand. Even you don't understand the passage of the program, you can guess the passage by watching the scene. Sound effect is also useful to concentrate. Sound effect makes the watcher's feeling nervous, sad, exciting and happy.->makes viewers feel nervous, sad, exciting, or happy. For an example, if->when you watch the movie 'King kong', sad song comes out when King kong dies. It makes people full of emotion, making them feel sad. By these effects, people can get more interest in the movies and they can concentrate and obtain more information. 예시가요// 좋은정보를 이해하고 집중해서 얻을 수 있다 와 연결되어 있는 거였으면 좋겠네요. 소설을 읽어도 사람은 울 수도 있고, 감정들을 느낄 수 있자나요.. **제가 옛날에 썼던 이주제에 대한 예시 중에는 책으로만 과학적이론을 읽었을때 이해하지 못했던 부분이 TV의 한 다큐멘터리 프로그램으로 한번에 이해가 되었다. TV의 visual and auditory aids가 내가 더 쉽게 이해할 수 있게 해주었다. 왜냐하면 추상적이고 복잡한 개념들은 눈과 귀를 통해 보고 들으면서 간접적으로 경험을 하는 것 같이 되고, 이에 따라서 쉽게 정보를 얻을 수 있기 때문이다. 이런식으로 썼었어요^^ Secondly, TV is more memorable-> encourages people to remember easily rather than books. Like I mentioned previously, TV uses two kinds of sense. However reading a book only uses one sense, looking->looking at the words. Also the sense 'looking' is different between these two methods. TV is a picture. We look at those pictures and get some information through the picture. On the other side, book is sentence. It is a literature. We have to read the sentence and understand it. One research says that looking at the image is more easy->easier to memorize than looking at the words. By the effect of looking at the image and listening the sound effect->visual and auditory aids, TV is easier to remember than reading the books.
첫번째 support의 2번째 예시네요;; 문단을 붙여서 책은 이렇고 TV는 이렇다. 그래서 TV가 더 좋다. 이런식로 쓰시는게 더 통일성 있고, 탄탄해 보일 것 같아요^^
To conclude, because of interest, memory, and hot news, watching TV is a better way to get information. Getting some information by books can be more beneficial sometimes. However if you think it more broadly, watching TV is a better way. |
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예를 들면 TV가 업데이트 된다 이거는 TV안에 내부가 update된다라고 들릴 수도 있을듯..
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