In order to fully understand what is happening in the world, we must read newspaper; television news does not give enough information. 신문 볼래? VS TV 뉴스볼래? |
It could be debatable whether or not we must read newspaper to totally grasp what is happening in the world rather than watch television news. Some people might assert that newspapers have for a long provided a great deal of information in a detail concerning the world situation. However, in opposition to this view, I strongly agree with the idea that we should watch television news in order to perfectly apprehend issues that is happening in the world for the following reasons. (Tv가 충분히 news를 전달하지 못한다는 의견에 반대이므로 we can fully understand what is happening in the world by television news for the following reasons.이런식으로 쓰는게 낫겠죠?) To begin with, television news can provide us with a variety of information that existed newspapers cannot proffer->that papers cannot proffer.// (예시는 생동감있는 현장을 전해준다인데 support 내용은 다양한 정보를 제공한다이네요. Support를 고쳐야할듯~^^)One of the major features of television news is that television news has a role to present vivid situations. To illustrate, when the war between the United States and Iraq took place, many news reporters across the globe went to Iraq in spite of risking their lives in order to capture vivid situations and convey vivid atmosphere of the battlefields. With the aid of the vivid scenes, we accurately could know what was happening and felt a sense of tragedy of the war. Therefore, television news is a more conducive means with respect to functioning to represent actual situations. Vivid = clear, detailed, realistic, telling, moving, affecting, powerful……한 줄 안에도 vivid가 여러 개 보여서요^^ On top of that, newspaper is more likely to distort true information and knowledge. One significant reason is that newspapers are usually made by some editors who have certain tendencies that can influence news. To put it more specific, we can see that some newspapers companies have fabricated false information and sometimes leave out overarching news that can degrade the government's prestige in favor of the government. However, television news is much less likely to distort the real information because people can judge the situation based on the scenes of the news by themselves. 이거는 약간 약한 support같은 것이… 자기회사에 불리하면 방송을 안 하는 경우도 있고, 영상편집을 잘못하는 경우도 있어서…이건 paper가 꼭 진실을 말한다에 대한 주제에대해서 쓴 것 같아요^^ To sum up, I wholeheartedly believe that we must obtain enough information through television news because it can present various information that newspapers cannot-> papers cannot present and it can provide more and more vivid situations with the help of the vivid scenes of the news. All in all, television news is a very useful source of information over newspapers. |