외국에서 공부하는게 자기 나라에서 공부하는 것보다 더 좋다. |
Nowdays, many people have belived that the places where they are living in are more and more becoming globalized. They also think that it should be needed for student to follow this trand. I strongly support the idea that it is better for students to attend schools or universities outside their home countries.
First of all, students who study in other countries can gain a variety of experiences from its culture and people in there. Students are also capable to learn about another country's culture, to meet people who were grown up in different background and to feel flash from its different environment. When I went to china as an exchange student, for example, I could see numerous scenes and meet many friend who was living in there. I really got useful information. Although I had stayed for 5 months, many things from another country where I had never been to is very helpful for me. In addition, I was much motivated to make me to challenge more my student's period and my life.
Secondly, students studying abroad can also learn a language effectively. It is very plasible for us to hear the fact that it is more beneficial for students to live in other countries so that they can study an foreign language easily. To be specific, statistics about between students studying abroad and studying in home countries has showned that about more than 73% students studying abroad finished their language learning more quikly than students studying in home countries.
In conclusion, attending schools and universities in other countries has many benefits and it is better than studying in home countries. It will be so fascinating to go other countries for students who are planning to go to other countries and to study foriegn languages. |
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