Whether the ability
to coordinate became has become more
important these days compared to the past is very controversial on social
these days. Many people think that the ability
of cooperating has gotten
more essential. Indeed, there are many people who claim that the
coordination is the a major part of
people’s life. However, I strongly think that the ability to coordinate did
has not become more necessary these days
compared to the past. There are the main two main
reasons which support this opinion.
First of all, the development of information
technology and communication made the coordination less important. Without
effort, coordination is achieved through other methods. For the first example, Kakaotalk is the a
representative example of the conveying system. Especially in universities, people in the certain groups they usually talk and plan about their
activity in Kakaotalk. This means they do not
really gather in a place to do an activity. (예시가 아쉽습니다. 꼭 같은 공간에 모여야만 협동이 가능한 건
아닙니다.) For the second example, this is related to
facebook Another representative example is Facebook.
As you know, (이 표현은 쓰지 않는
게 좋습니다.) it is a program for people bragging their god
things to other people, but facebook is sometimes used for works. (굳이 넣지 않아도 되는 정보입니다.) In a company called
Samsung about 80percent of workers who work in Samsung used Facebook for company’s works. These two examples demonstrate that the
development of information technology and communication made the
coordination less essential. (Kakaotalk 및 Facebook을 이용하는 게 왜 cooperation이 아닌지 설명이
부족합니다.)
Secondly, the cause of multinationalism
and globalization has resulted in the
coordination becoming less essential. Nation
of community, coordination, harmonism watered down (무슨 뜻인지 파악하기
어렵습니다.). Cooperation within a nation will decrease and segregation within its culture will increase. For the first example, a myriad of ethnicities and cultures has mixed the certain
species of each country people and this makes has made the coordination obscure. For the
second example, different ideas of people from other
varying countries
reduces the effect of the ability to
coordinate. Especially the regional idea (이게 무슨 뜻이죠?)is the main cause of fights and making
has made coordination less necessary. These two
examples show that multinationalism and
globalization have made result
the ability to coordinate less essential.
In conclusion, there were are main two main
reasons why I think that the ability to coordinate became has become less more important these days
compared to the past: the development of communication and information
technology and the cause of
multinationalism and globalization.