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Some people might say that money is everything all because they think
it allows us to do anything we want. However, in my way of thinking, it is just
ridiculous for us to consider money as success criterion the most important fact to be successful
for two reasons.concerning that Firstly, we can live without money, but we can’t without
health. Moreover, I firmly believe that the family makes us feel successful.
To start with, money without a healthy body is useless. No
one knows when they die. What I mean is that if we lose our health were dead, we could not use
any what good are success and money? For example, my grandfather ran a company. He though the richer he
was, the more he would be likely to succeed. (Wrong grammar structure) For this reason, he exerted every
effort to earn more money and he finally became one of the rich. But the
problem was that he had been too busy to spend any money and he ended up
passing away with no time to enjoy his life. He told all our family members
that he regretted that he should not have spent any money right before he died.
When I heard this story from my mother, I realized that health goes before
money. (Meaning?)
On top of that, I am sure that family is the best yardstick
to determine whether the person succeeds or not. For example, there was a study
conducted the Gallup Organization to determine whether having a family and lots
of money affect our life span. There were two groups monitored. The former
group was formed of those who are not rich and they have their own family. And
the latter group consisted of those who were wealthy and lived alone. The
result was intriguing. The average life expectancy of the first group was way
higher than the one of the other group. It is because family is the only ones
to make us successful and satisfied with our life. Furthermore, living with
family makes us continue to be happy and forget about our worries according to
researchers. This study proved that people who have family not only are more
likely feel successful, but also live longer.
To sum up, money will be no use when we depart from this
life and family is more essential to us than money. In this regard, I am sure
that money never ensures our success.
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