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A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? Use specific reasons in your recommendation.
In many fields, investigating in research is important. Although research may not bring about immediate commercial outputs, it paves ways for future improvements in the field. If I were given a choice between a center for business and for agriculture, I would choose the latter, because of the increasing need for new kinds of crops and many support programs for business research by companies.
First of all, as people become more interested in health, they tend to eat healthful products. With the developments in agricultural science, modifying the genes of crops have been realized. Agricultural scientists are trying to develop new kinds of crops which are low in calorie but contain high proportions of essential nutrients. In South Korea, more and more kinds of rice have been invented as rice is the main recipe in Korea. A research center for agriculture may trigger such research resulting in inventing a new type of crop. It will lead not only to a patent but also to general improvement in nation's health level.
On the other hand, there are many research centers for business supported by corporations already. In case of my school, there are two business research centers supproted by Samsung and LG each. As corporations are abundant in capital, those research centers are well financed. Although research in business is important for devicing ways of advertising, managing a company and so on, they usually result only in the profit of companies. Therefore, I think current research centers for business is enough.
In sum, agricultural research may improve the general health state of the people and there are sufficient number of research centers for business in Korea. Therefore, I recommend building a new research center for agriculture in my country.
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