■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. | |
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I have been living in my town for over five years since I moved for my job. Like every other city, my city has come mertis and demerits. I heard one of my friends is planning to move to where I live. Because a merit for one person can be a demerit for another, here I present some characteristics of my town, which can be categorized to merits and demrits for this friend.
First of all, my town has some good traits in trasportaion system. It is not suffering from traffic jams.Even though it is the 5th largest city in Korea, it is hard to experience to be stuck in traffic. This friend has lived in the biggest city in Korea and it took over one hour for her to commute. I think she certainly will be satisfied with no traffic jam. Besides, my city is located in the middle of Korea and is connected to other big cities and countrysides by express trains and highways. This enables people to go other places easily and rapidly. My friend really likes to travel around. This can be one of the best merits of this town for her. Furthermore, my city is a cluster of scientific research. Government developed this town especially for research institutes. Many of them provide general educational courses to puplic and during weekends, the institutes which have huge parks inside are open to puplic. This can gratify my friend who liked science at schools and enjoys relaxing time in parks.
On the contrary, public transportation systym in my town is terrible. Car-owners will be happy in my town because all the systems are focused for cars. However, my town has only one subway line and bus system is not well developed. It is not unusual to wait for a bus for over 30 minutes. This can disappoint my friend who does not own a car. Also, there are less oppotunities to enjoy the cultural life. This city is not big enough to attract cultural events like performances, musicals and other shows. My friend really like musicals and this is one of the biggest demerits of this city.
To sum up, my city has not traffic jams and transportation system conneting to other cities and this is good for my friend who likes travelling. At the same time, this city has poor public transportation system including buses and lack of cultural events and this is bad for her who does not have a car and enjoys cultural life. I hope she will do the right choice for her based on these merits and demerits of my town.
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