■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic :Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. | |
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The outer space which was mysterious for a long time, however, the outer space became much familiar existence as Astronomy is developing rapidly. At this instance, we would able to plan to explore the outer space such as the moon and to the other planets. Nevertheless, I think the government should invest more much money as possible for our basic need on the Earth than exploring the outer space.
First, we have to solve our problem first. For example, there are a number of people who are suffered severely by starvation in Africa. They don’t have money for buy any food. Numerous people are dying right now. If the government spends money for people who need food intensely instead invest money for explore to other planets, they would save a lot of people from many poverty problems.
In addition, many people died by anguish diseases. Our Biology grows quickly recently that helps cure people who became sick. In contrast, many new diseases are observing as well and we don’t have many remedies yet for protect and cure new diseases. In particular, the swine flu is becoming notorious these days and we don’t even have a therapy yet. Scientists need money for study for new diseases.
Last, our serious pollution issues need urgent methods to protect, and recover. Myriad of natures (for instance rivers, oceans and forests) are destroyed by humans. Our planet is going to die and people are going to explore to another planet? That doesn’t make sense at all. We have to save the Earth by ourselves.
As a result, I think the government should spend more much money as possible for our planet than traveling and observe the outer space. Shortly, the Earth is having many problems intensely at present, and we have to save the Earth. | |
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