■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. | |
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I am living in one of the big cites in my country. Because my town is near the capital of my country, Korea, it is easy for people who live in my tome to access the capital. However, it has high density of population so that there are riaks of accidents. If my friend intend to move into my towm, I can explain what advantages and disadvantages are specifically.
To begin with, as one of the most important advantantages, my town has accessibility toward the capital. The transportation system is well organized so that my neighborhoods can reach tjere within thirty minutes. Buses, taxies, and subway provide people who live in my town convenience. Moreover, since the city is the planned town, it has many facilities such as theater, shoppin mall, and public parks. People can always go to there and enjoy their lives with others. It is possible for people to meet new firends, and further, to obtain good information. I think that this is another advantage my town has.
However, if people who want to move in my town likes quite atmosphere and safe environment, he or she may hesitate to move into my town. There is noise around me caused by my people. Uncountable people visit my town to experience various activities such as shopping and watching a movies. This is the most imfortant factor to make a noise. In addition, it is not hard to face the risks of a car accident. If he has his own car and wants to drive it, he should expect that she can undergo the traffic jam whereever. This is not only almost nightmare to owner drivers but the reason he dislikes my town.
In conclusion, when it comes to accessibility to the capital and usage of various facilities, my city is perfect placce. It must be the fact that we can enjoy convenient life. On the other hands, noise, risks such as a car accident and trafiic jam make people decision whether they move into my town or not.
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