■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Topic : Parents are the best teachers. | |
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Some people may object to the statement that parent are not the most ideal teachers to children. They believe that parents are lack of professional knowledge so that they do not educate their children productively. However, I firmly believe that parent are the best teachers. The rationale behind this believe is that parents are the role model of their children in many occasions. On top of that, they know their children more than anyone in the world.
To begin with, parent are the people who are trusted by their children the most. This is a crucial idea about being a good teacher because children cannot learn anything if they do not trust their instructors. Since children believe their parentswholeheartdely without any doubt, parents can make the most ideal teaching figure to their children. For example, unlike other people, I finished the first-level education, commonly referred as elementary school education, by home-schooling. My mother was my tutor and she was also my teacher for other subjects such as math, science, languages, to name but a few. My learning was progressing in leaps and bounds under her supervision. As a result of that, at the end of the year, I passed the exam that qualified me for the next level of education with a superior socre. If I did not trust my mother, this whole home-school thing would never have been successful like this.
In addition, parents are aware of their children's weak points but also strong points. This allows them to help their children to improve their weakness, and also allow them to strengthen their children's strong points. To cite a personal example, when I was home-schooled by my mother, my mom found out that my numerial ability was exceptional. So, she encouraged me to work hard and persistent when I started to attend to school. Consequently,I received a high grade in math in my college entrance exam and won a merit-based scholarship when I entered university. If it were not for my mother's finding, I would have never been able to know that I was given a special ability in math.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that parent are the best teachers. The truth of this argument becomes clear when we consider factors such as a strong relationship between children and parents creates the most desirable results in learning, and also parents know their children more than anyone in th world. Children probably know how much are their parent willing to sacrifice themselves for their children
and how much are their parent devoted to them. Because they know this already, they will work much harder under their parent's supervision. | |
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