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In this modern society, many people think that mobile phones have some negative effect to people. However, I agree that mobile phones make people more freedom because it offers people more convenient services as well as it doesn't cost expensive.
First of all, mobile phones is much more convenient than the past's phones owing to having around. People can use those to contact with people in anywhere, anytime even if they don't have money. They just need a mobile phone. For example. in the past, many phones were in house. So those period people have to use that in house. If they were not in house, they could not telephone to someone even though they really want to do. However, according to the development of technology, we can use the phone in anywhere because we can just take that in our pocket. We don't need to go home, and we don't need any help to ring.
In addition, it don't require much cost. In this society, many people are using their cell phones on cheap cost because the cell phones company don't require expensive money. For example, in my country, Korea, almost of people have their cell phone from elementary school students to elderly. And, they charge their cost just 10 dollars in average even if they use many services. In the past, we had to find public phones to call someone because we didn't have even phone in house, and it required expensive cose. However, nowadays, we can use cell phones on cheap costs. My mother often said that it is amazing that we can use the cell phones, we didn't image that it would be possible. She also said that thanks to technology, we can use many services on cheap prices, specially in mobile phones. My mom and I telephone each other, if we are in distant places.
To sum up, I definitely agree that the mobile phones have given people more freedom because not only is it more useful and practical but also it can use those services on cheap prices. Thanks to the improvement of technology, we can be used many various, convenient things such as airplane, automobile, cell phones, and the internet. These don't give positive effect on people. However, through using those things effectively, we can take more abundant living in every lifes.