When we see movies we can get much information through them, especially about the other countries. Even though we
First of all, all movies are made by human, filmmakers, and filmmakers often reflect their opinion in their movies in which they reflect their opinion. It's okay but the matter is that sometimes filmmakers reflect their opinion not only into the story but also into the background (이유에 대한 구체적 설명을 하고 난 후에 예시로 넘어가시길 바랍니다). For example, some Chinese movie directors love their country so much that they want to be China always a great and healthy country, even though there have been many dark sides in China culture. Countries in the movies are likely more filmmaker's imagination rather than actual fact.
Second, because most movie should make audience attempt, image of the country inside the movie world often depends on the audence's character. For exampe, when western movies tell about Japan, they always treat samurais and ninjas, even though there aren't any samuraies and ninjas in modern Japan, why? I think thats because lots of western movie watchers think Japan is the country of samuraies and ninjas, therefore when they see Japanese samuraies or ninjas in the movie, they fascinate to them. Also there are many traditional images of other countries, as cowboys of United State, knights of Europe etc. Traditional images of foreign country can make foreign character stable and they can easily summarize the character, but they aren't fact usually.
Finally, when we see movies, we can find lots of false informations based on filmmakers mistake about foreign countries. Usually filmmakers study hard about a country when they dicided to use it into their movie. But some of the filmmakers who didn't study hard enough to present foreign countries make wrong image of the country in their movie. Movies made by stupid filmmakers often have false information and it is pretty dangerous for movie watcher who simply thinks everything in the movie are formal truth.
In conclusion, I think movies can't tell a lot of things about a country because countries in the movies are filmmakers imagination and it also depend on the movies main audiences' characteristics, also there are lots of false definitions about foreign countries in the unadapted movies.
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