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The expression, "Never, never give up" means keeping trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Each person who lives in the world has dreams. They want to accomplishment their goals, and they try hard to achieve their goals. The expression "Never, never give up" helps us to try harder. Because of this expression, sometimes we can get the new power which courage us to challenge to our goals. But I think that sometimes we have to give up our goals, because of the reasons below.
One reason is that things that many people want are limited. If all of the people in the world attained their each goal, there would not be any taxi drivers or newspaper deliveries. This means that we have to give up when our goals seem to be impossible. This will be more wisely. For examples, all of my friends want to go normal high schools. But some students can't go to there since their scores are not enough to enroll the high schools. If teachers said them not to give up to go normal high schools, they would even fail technical high schools.
Another reason is another chance to challenge to other things. Following that expression "Never give up", we can only have to try hard to achieve the first goal. But our minds can be changed, so our goals also have to be changed. How can we do what I don't like? To achieve what I really want to attain, we sometime have to give up the original goals. Let me offer an example. I want to major engineering and economics now. However, it will be able to be changed. If I keep trying and never stop working for my first goal, I will feel regret about that.
Until now, I wrote about the reasons which illustrate that sometimes we have to give up our goals. Of course, keeping trying and never stop working for our goals are very important to achieve our goals. However, sometimes there are time when we must give up our goals like the situations when our minds are changed or the goals seem to be impossible. For these reasons, I disagree with the expression "Never, never give up."
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