Do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is better to spend time with one or two close friends than a large number of friends. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
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In this fast faced age, people met so many people in their entire lives. Therefore, it is controversial that whether spending time with one or two close friends is better than a large number of friends. Some people might say that it is better to spend time with many people because of its diverse experiences and widen relationships. However, I firmly believe that spending with one or two close friends is much better because it provides us a deeper relationship and a faster decision. First of all, spending time with one or two close friends is very helpful to develop the relationship deeper. With a small number of friends, people can talk to each other about their own secretes or significant problems easier. By having such conversation, the relationship among them becomes stronger and deeper, and even they are able to get valuable advises to endure a hard time through close conversations. For instance, when I was seventeen years old, my father’s business failed and our family circumstance became worse instantly. Then, I really needed some one who listen my terrible situation, and I could open my mind to my closest two friends. They sympathized and gave encouraging advices as a mentor. If I spent my time with many friends, I would not talk to them about my serious problems. Making a close relationship with a few friends is more meaningful when one is in trouble. On top of that, I am sure that people can make an immediate decision with a small number of friends. When people meet together, they should decide their way every time concerning what to eat or where to go. If the group is large number of people, they are not able to make their minds easily and apt to delay. According recent research released by HHH institution in In summary, it is absolutely true that being with a small number of friends is better to develop a deeper relationship and make a fast decision than a larger number. As friends are getting close, they are aware of other’s style such as interest, hobby, and thought, but it is almost impossible when they gather in a large number of friends. By spending time with a few friends, people can solve their problem and enjoy their time more efficiently. |
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