Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to plan for your life carefully when you are young. Use reasons and specific details to support your answer. |
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Thesedays there are many young people who make a plan for their life specifically. However I believe that it is not significant to make a blueprint of our future when we are young. The rationale behind this is that our future life can change all the time if we are young. Moreover, it is too early to determine of our detail future schedule when we are young.
First of all, we can always dream to our future and change to our vision if we are not old. Therefore we need not make our plan carefully. When I was a middle school, for example, I really wanted to be a doctor so hoped to care poor people in our country. However I realized that I had an more interests to mathematics than medical and eventually entered a department of mathematics in university. I saw many times this cases. Many youth have a lot of dreams such as soccer player, president, and doctor but we have to keep in mind that thier future can change whenever.
Secondly, the youth are too young to make a life schedule. Because thier determining power does not muture to criteria what is correct or not yet. One of my friends wanted to be a baseball player, when he was a elemantary school, since he though that a baseball player well made money and looked so very nice. As old as his ages, he found that his talents is in music, so he turn his interest into music.
In conclusion, every young people have thier nice future vision and at the same time thier dream changes as they are old. That's why it is not important for many young poeple to make a plan for thier life carefully.
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