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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn. Give specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Teachers should be paid according to how much their students learn, When its statement come to me, I will agree that because of motivating to the teachers,
First of all, I will agree this statements, because of motivating to the teachers. As a rule, there are many teachers in korea, who could never lay off, which is very stable job, guarantee the retirement age. Thus, many people would want to be a teacher. This is a korean real life. In this case, for example, our school have a some teachers, who behavior the life, such as, dozing the class time, coming lately, all the time same curriculums, and droning the word. In this case, we would have to study for entering the university. If this is going to be all the time, we can not be able to enter good university, which is good university the same as life of success, in korea, universal view. we will meet the bad situation, when undergraduate the school.
Moreover, I will agree this statements, because of good for quality of class. I describe the korea situation, which is gloomy, sad environment. In the bad surrounding, we have to study, merely enter the best university in the individual mind. If teachers have a payments, according to how much their students learn, we will get good surroundings, during the class. They will effort on the making contents, which develop the better things, entering the good university, too hard lecture to us. This will make bright future for us, following students, and future of nation, in the positive attitude.
In conclusion, I describe that I agree this statements, because first reason is motivating to the teachers, second reasons is related to good for quality of class. I insisit that is actual need to us.
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