It is better to spend money on a thing that will last long such as jewels than on a short-term pleasure such as vacations. Do you agree or disagree? |
In modern society, it has been controversial whether or not spending money on the thing which last long is better than consuming money to feel pleasure that last short – term. However, I basically disagree with the position that it is beneficial for us to spend money on long – term substance compared to the short – term exciting feelings. This is because it is possible to lose expensive substance we have purchased, and people tend to change their favor in process of time. Most of all, if we consume our money on buying a substance which is possible to last long, there always are some possibilities to lose that thing. Generally, people are not complete, and sometimes, they lose their belongings even though they tend to try to avoid losing their materials. Moreover, some of the substances they have lost are very expensive. Accordingly, it would be damage for possessor`s mind, and it might made the possessor feel regret for purchasing that substance because they are not able to receive any compensation. For example, in high school years, I have purchased an expensive bike. At that time, the bike was a state of art product just out on the market as well as possessing lovely colors I prefer. However, after 3 day from the point I have spent the money on buying the substance, I have lost my bike, and could not find that anywhere. It made me be disappointment and I could not do something such as homework, even mid-term exam completely because the discouragement caused by losing my valuable thing had negative effect on my life. From my experience, we are able to conclude that spending lots of money to purchase expensive things would be more risky than investing feeling short – term pleasure. In addition, people`s mind are usually changeable. As a matter of fact, our preference tends to change although any factors which affect us do not exist around us. Thus, even though I buy things which completely match our style, I could feel that the substances are not my style anymore in the future. As a result, it is not helpful for people to purchase their substances which they have good feeling about because we might regret spending money on that thing. For instance, I liked pop music in childhood. So, I spent much money on getting CD of famous pop stars, and I have 2003 number of CD concerned with pop music. On the other hand, as I grow, I do not love pop music anymore, I am regretting spending so much money on colleting the countless CDs. The lots of CDs which I have collected by passion toward music do not have any meaning to my life now. This might be considered limited personal experience. However, I convince that this case would prove that consuming much money on substances would be foolish decision. |
부족한점이 너무 많으니까 쓱 보고 아무데나 지적해주시면 감사하겠습니다. ^^