Important decisions should not be made without others. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? |
In our life time, there are several times that we have to decide important things such as getting marriage or choosing a job. Some people prefer to make important decisions with others because they can be advised and helped from them. However, when it comes to me, I prefer choose it on my own. First of all, peopole tend to try harder when it comes to own responsibilities. Deciding on their own means that the responsibilities of it's failure, success or satisfaction and so on are totally up to oneself. He cannot blame anyone and complain how terrible choice he made, because no one told him to choose it. Actually, I'd decided going exchange student on my own, though my parents paid for me. And I had hard time at there and sometimes I wanted give it up. However I could not say that to my family. Because when they asked me again and again, whether I really want it or not, I said seriously I want to go America and I'll be fine. Moreover I did not want to disappoint them. |
To be honest, I'm really bad at writing.
I don't know what I have to do to improve my writing skill.
And as you can see at my essay, the word choice is maybe middle school level...?
And I guess some sentences you may not understand due to grammar error.
So, plea~~~~se help me what can I do and fix the errors.