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People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
Modern people have a trouble reducing the stress from the works, difficulties of modern life. In this essay, I will describe that diferent ways of escaping the stress and difficulties, what I think the best ways of reducing stress, because of follwing reasons.
First of all, I insist that best ways of reducing stress is that go to the singing room, because of releasing the my emotion. As I am a university student, who have many troubles, that is getting the job, having a god scores, taking the many classes, on account to the many troubles. I would express the my feelings, outer the space, if I do not the release the my emotions, I will go mad because of stress. For example, in my case, the best ways of escaping the stress is go to the singing rooms, where have the not hindering any rooms, have a opportunity ,such as isolated space alone, I can vocalize as much as I can. I can do there, everything, jumping, screaming , releasing the anguishes in the room. Here is the space, I can reduce the stress, and troubles.
Moreover, I insist that best ways of reducing stress is that climb the mountain, because of controling the my emotion. As a rule, most of the people would mount the mountain, where is silent space, have a fresh air, suffer the not crowed situation because of people. Thus, some people would say that to heal the stress go to the mountain. For example, in my case, have a trouble through above of reasons. Thus, Sometimes, I would go to the mountain, during the mounting time, in the body having much the sweats, which is have strong mind, that I still stay living existence, through the behavior I would feel subsiding the stress. Why I think climbing the mountain is best ways, there have high a peak, when I am there, I can look all the benethe the world. when I am there, I can forget all the problems. Therefore, I think that best ways of reducing stress is that climb the mountain,
To sum up, I describe that diferent ways of escaping the stress and difficulties, what I think the best ways, first reason is related to going the singing room, two reasons is about to climbing the mountain.
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