Do you agree with this statement? - The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. - 30분에 맞춰서 쓰긴 썼는데 좀 이상한가 봐주세요 ..ㅠㅠ 몇점정도 예상되는지도요.. |
Some people say that it is much wiser for people to give up thier goals if its possibilirities is low. Considering this opinion, although it partially makes sense, I strongly support that trying one's best is most important thing in our lives. Not only can it give people to good ramification in the end, but it also allows people to chance to feel a sense of accomplishment.
To begin with, endeavor plays significant role in providing people with success or great consequence such as passing exams or becoming famous and prestigeous people. Even if it is extremely difficult to achieve they want, they can get a great good result from their strive for goals. To illustrate, when I was in a fifth grade, I had difficulty in understanding and solving the probledm in Math calss. However, I did not give up and quit. As a result, I got A grade in mid-term examination. If I had not tried my best, I would not have been able to get high score.
In addition, when we strived hardly for something whatever we want, we can gain satisfaction related from our endeavors in spite of poor results. This is largely due to the fact that process for coming ture our goals is more important and invaluable than results. Although I no doubt that the better we get results the more we may feel satisfaction which is associated with the consequences. For example, I have studied TOEFL for exchange student. However, It is very difficult for me to take a test. In this reason, I sometimes think that I can not do that. Nevertheless, I do not give up this is because I know that challenge is priceless and good experience and chance to study English. In the end, I will be fail to apply for exchange student. However, I will not regret my choice because of product of my hard work.
To sum up, I strongly agree that people should not give up and quit somethings they want. This is not only because hard-working can lead people to succeed, but also because people benefits from their endeavors despite of their poor ramifications. On the whole, I wholeheartedly agree the old saying goes, " The heaven helps those who helps themselves." Likewise, we should strive hardly and passionaly for our objects and dreams. |