[Do you agree or disagree? University education is essential for the success in human life.]
Nowadays, a growing number of people decide to enter a university for thier successful life. I totally agree with them for two reasons. First, by attengding university, students can be more prepared to do their professional job in the future. Also, a wide range of people who students meet in university allows them to biuld up broad social connection.
To begin with, students' success in their professional job is based on sufficient knowledge that they would come to learn in university. In these days, according to harsh economic circumstance, having a professional job become more and more difficult. However, students could get a job and do thier job succesfuly if they are prepared well in their university. If they chooes their major about a their special area ; an area associate with their fild of future job, they can build up a variety of knowledge about thier specialty. Also, various cultural studies that they meet in university allow them to build a wide range of background. Both can help their future job do successfuly To illustrate, a study by one of research companies showed us that many companies prefer to choose the one that is given university education because he is prone to adapt more quicky to his works. Also university graduate person is likly to make less mistakes. Conpanies said applicants who graduate a university have great job background, and knowledge. In this regard, I'm sure attending university is a key to make a succesful future career.
Moreover, a variey of people that they will meet in university will be good lifelong friends in their life. Some people say that it is the most important factor of succesful life that making broad social connection. In the university, students meet many people who have different, or the same interest and their own value, and it lead student to buid up wide social connection. First and formost, the people who students can meet in thier major courses would be good colleague in thier future. With them, students can discuss thier special interest, their major, and promote each other to study more harder. Not only in thier major, but also in thier libral arts, students can meet many people having different interests in various area. In my case, I could meet many chinese friends in the course about chinese culture. By preparing for presentaion in that course together, They made me have more interest about difference Asia culture, so after taking this coure, I often met them and took about different culture of Korea, and China. Throught that exprience I became open-minded person, and I believe this make my like more rich, and make foreign friends.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that studing in university is essential peoples' success life. According to attending university, they can be prepared well for thier future career, and can make a wide range of social connection. Given this, it is not too much to emphasize that we should aware of importance of a university education for succesful life.
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