■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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Due to irresponsible activities from people, environment is being devastated in an alarming rate. Overexploitation of resources, a large amount of emission of Co2 and other gases and excessive agriculture activities are destroying the nature of world. As a result, a number of important natural resources are disappearing, which all should be preserved. Out of many, I believe saving clean water should be on the top priority since it is a basic resource for both humans and animals.
Clean water is an indispensable part of people's life. Besides the fact that water is essential for human's survival, it could not be detached from every part of life of people. Water is not only used in homes, but it is also utilized in various parts of industries. Suppose one person does not have water but have to live for a week. First, he could not have a shower or brush his teeth, which might be stressful. Second, he will have to starve from hunger because he could cook food without water. Third, his life might be in jeopardy since it is commonly known that a person could not live more than one week without water. Hence, clean water is the resource that should obviously be protected.
Moreover, water is a foundation of lives of every kind of animals and plants. Plants have to absorb water to survive, and plants are vital for ecosystem since they become food sources for many animals. Needless to say, animals also need water to sustain their lives. In this system, when water disappears, the balance of ecosystem would collapse, which could cause life-threatening effects to people. To specify this, when plants die, there are no sources to clean air and no sources of food for animals. Then, almost all animals would become extinct. At last, people will have neither have food to eat nor clean air to drink. By taking this situation into account, clean water is the most important resource that should be protected.
In conclusion, I believe clean water is the resource that should be preserved first since it is an essence of both humans and other species. As a matter of fact, people do not recognize the importance of water, wasting water as much as they could. | |
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