■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer | |
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In this rapidly chaning society, people are more likely to have lunch or dinner outside due to thier time constraints and seaching for exotic and delicious dishes.
While many people prefer have meal at restarurants or food stands enjoying many convienences, I strongly believe that eating food at home is much more beneficial since homemade food is healthier as well as family can enjoy quality time while enjoying hoom food.
To begin with, There is no doub that homemade meals are far more good for health. This is mainly because most of restaurants and food stands are less likely to pay much attention to the effect of food. They rather focus on tast of dishes as well as good looking wanting to draw in more customers so that make a profit.
There is very little reason to care about healthy ingredients, clear surrounding, and the balance of nutrition.
The best exapmel of this point is one report on restaurants in korea which was carried by a broadcasting station. The camera catched up the kichen of one of the most popular restaurant Which is very filthy and scattered. Because kichins are usually invisioble to customers, the cooks doen't pay attentions sanitary fittings and even used food that passed the expiration dates.
Furthermore, eating at home provide family with opportunity to strenghten family union.
This is truly valuable opportunity as todays' family is so hectic that have much chance to meet each other. Eating at home involved many activities such as preparing for food, setting the table, and discussion one's oppinions which fortify the bond of family union. From my personal exprience, my family has celebrited every Thanks giving day at home instead of going out for dinner. We prepare a lot of traditional foods which are supposed to very expensive at restaurant, and enjoy comportable atmosphere.
We never have to worry about distraction from othe customers and servers or noises when we certainly had if we choosed have dinner at restaurant.
To conclude, homemade foods have far more advantages than food at restaurants. The rationale behind this is homemade foods are made from healthy environment, as well as confer great opportunity to have family time.
Eating is indispensible to people's lives so that it is wise for people to consider what effect the food has and where is the most suitable for their meals.
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